webnovel
Benoit_Valtin
Benoit_ValtinLv111yr
2023-11-24 16:09

after reading the first 16 chapters I am now going to make an objective review: it is very poorly constructed, we go from a guy who knows nothing to do except say that he is 23 years old and that he is tired of it where he is a guy who is happy to be where he is suddenly we don't really know why he becomes happy. we go from a guy who has almost no powers to a guy who does, then to a guy who has powers and knows how to use them and we never get any explanation of how that happens. without forgetting that the hero is over 27 when he arrives at school, and that he will start going out with 17 year old girls, well done.

I am in legacies

Tumelo566
Not enough ratings
29 Chs

Liked by 1 people

LIKE
Replies1
Tumelo566
Tumelo566Author

*writing

1yr
Other Reviews
Siddharth_Goli
Siddharth_GoliLv4

very good book with good potential needs improvement in the power leveling aspect, not because it's bad or anything because it can be so much better

4mth

Daoist9vQkph
Daoist9vQkphLv1

the main characters design and character is good, but when it comes to his powers and the way he improves them as story goes on I have my issues since the idea of runes and warlocks might be good but the execution of it leaves a lot to be desired cut down on the ai use on his power explanations because it feels bad when read and try to balance the characters power with the verse since it seems a bit incompatible with the other powers so a power up to all supernatural creatures might be a good idea since I did think legacies had so much potential in that aspect, but they ruined it. the show had the potential to be the most epic supernatural series, and the writers and producers just blew all that away for nothing! always gets mad when I think about it.

4mth
Cody_Mohr
Cody_MohrLv4

this is a very interesting story I hope it continues it has many avenues to explore

11mth
Raphis
RaphisLv3

The story is light and easy to understand. Indeed, the pace of the narrative is a bit slower, but perhaps that's one of the novel's strengths. In terms of writing quality, it's well-organized and varied. The only drawback might be the scarcity of dialogue in some parts, and perhaps each chapter feels a bit quiet or lacking in excitement, but that could be due to the limited number of chapters. Overall, it's good.

1yr
Related Stories

Lord of the Mysteries: Lord Of The Dream Realm

Meng Xian, transported into the world of "Lord of the Mysteries," initially believes she's in a parallel universe. However, when she recognizes her colleague Zhou Mingrui as the protagonist of the novel, she realizes she's in a world destined for destruction. To survive, she devises a plan to befriend Zhou Mingrui and gain access to the Sefirah Castle, a place of immense power that might shield her from the impending doom. The good news is that Meng Xian has arrived long before the main events of the plot begin The bad news is that the plot's events are far off—thousands of years away. But her plan takes an unexpected turn when she discovers a mysterious book in the store This book, infused with the power of dreams, drags her into the ancient 2nd Epoch, far from her carefully laid plans.

haruhiflora · Book&Literature
Not enough ratings
20 Chs

Liberating the Potterverse(New)

I'm posting it here as I had mistakenly posted it on novel section instead of Fan-fic. Ela Acharya now Ela Amberheart is born into Harry Potter world. watch how she uses her intelligence to explore the very limit of magic if there is any, while spreading love and affection to every pure soul. but is it really that everyone's favourite Harry Potter world with just a power hungry dark lord, manipulative light lord, Peter the betraying Rat and Ronald the jealous Weasley or there is something else, something beyond this reality something dark that is trying to wrestle control over this world. this is a fan fiction based on J.K. Rowling's famous work. I do not have any right or authority over any original character/plot except my SI characters.

Dreamer_1297 · Book&Literature
Not enough ratings
69 Chs

Hey, I said you are mine (Dramione)

When Draco and Hermione showed up as a couple after the summer, everyone was astounded. How did these two end up together? What happened during the summer? But no one knew their secret - that they had signed a contract! This is a light-hearted romance/humor fanfic, hope you enjoy! Disclaimer:The storyline in this is mine, but all characters belong to J.K. Rowling. Cover artwork belongs to original artist. P.S. If you liked this FanFic, please consider checking out my original work: Electra is in trouble. The story is set in a magical realism university and just like Hermione and Draco, Electra also has that special someone who appears to be distant yet secretly passionate -- who doesn't love to have a secret lover?

VesperKitsune · Book&Literature
4.9
51 Chs

The Beauty's Hidden Beast

In a twist that not even Yaya could have predicted, she's suddenly smack in the middle of Nivi's latest obsession: a world brimming with beast-men. No, not just your average hairy dudes, but handsome men with actual animal features. Determined to navigate this bizarre reality with her sanity intact, Yaya hatches a plan as pragmatic as her wardrobe: rehome these too-good-to-be-true "book husbands" to the one person who's always dreamed of such romances─Nivi─her best friend. !!! TRIGGER WARNINGS !!! 1. Yaya and Her Males: The relationship between Yaya and her future males will be far from an idyllic love story. Instead of healing each other wounds, they might just be opening new ones. It will get better along the way, I think... I hope. I'm here to present you a story, not a lecture on how to be a decent human. Feel free to criticize and judge my characters, whether in your mind or through the comments. If you spread awareness in my stead, that would be even more awesome, hehe. 2. Yaya vs. BQQ: If you thought BQQ set the bar for treating her males shitty, wait until you meet YY. You'll know what I mean once you dive into this novel. Feel free to form your own opinions about her─whether it's disdain, frustration, or outright disbelief. Defend your biases, embrace your reactions, and let out your inner rage, rawr. 3. Yaya: Her purpose isn't to be relatable. Not for me, not for you, not for anyone. But, feel free to explore her thought pattern and see the world through an entirely different lens. 4. Yaya vs. Nivi: Someone mentioned that Yaya needs Jesus, lol. In Yaya's world, Nivi is her Jesus. Just a small reminder for the readers who will decide to stick to the story: Those of you who keep up with the latest updates actually have the power to control the course of the story. So, instead of waiting for a stockpile, being active as soon as there is an update kind of pays off. It also motivates me to push out a new chapter faster *winks*. A/N: It's a fanfiction based on the "Beauty and the Beast" world.

ChubbyLiv · Book&Literature
Not enough ratings
118 Chs
Login