Finally a non Yuri female Mc and it's better than average in terms of fanfiction. I was just getting bored of Harem fics.

Sigh, such a good story with a fascinating and interesting mc but the author had to ruin it with the op nonsense! Isnt the gentle fist and having the best byagukan in the universe enough? maybe add senjutsu and even the tenseigan in the future? But NO that wasn't enough for the author; she is now mastering all the elements, learning medicine and killing anbu from the other side of the village with lightning before the academy. Hints about copying other bloodlines... etc. Its so over the top that even kaguya wouldn't be able touch her in a few years. Where is the suspense?

I love this mc and her how her brain works. Great writing in general with little to no mistakes at all. I am glad the author actually writing about her childhood and what she is doing because slowly telling a story justifies power scaling. None of that bs like 7 years later and mc is like "I know every jutsu and i have adamantine chains and also i got a tailed beast as well. Oh and also my chakra eclipses then sun."

let's see it's good start let's see how it will end good or bad let's see let's see

It's a shame that I fell in love because this Hinata can make me scream "PLEASE TREAD ON ME" 😅😭 I also hope to the author that the development of Naruto's friendship with the others will not be lost😆

I love your novel and your character and the story so far 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌

Very, well, very rarely when MS is a girl. The beginning is good, we are waiting for the continuation🎰🎰🎰🎰🎰🎰🎰🎰🎰🎰🎰🎰🎰🎰🎰🎰🎰🎰🎰[img=update][img=update][img=update]

So... I am enjoying this one a lot. It's a bit of a slow burn but I expect the story is going to pick up the pace as of the latest chapter. Although I have one nitpick, it's that Hiruzen was not evil. I can understand that this world could be an AU, but Hiruzen as manipulative as he is, is kind-hearted. In canon, he was a good guy while every one of his friends was corrupt. It didn't help he was a pushover when it came to Danzo. That blind faith is why he is seen as evil.

take the stars for no yuri. !'!"!"'!_(£(*!'!