Not bad, but kind of boring. The childhood arc is too long, with no serious training, just him fooling around with girls. The romance is just okay, with the normal tsundere cliche. If you want a romance slice of life fic to pass time, you have come to the right place.

Hello 🤗 I've picked up your work as a past time, I'll be completely honest with you. I honestly didn't think I was going to like your story, But don't get it twisted I'm not say it's bad and I don't judge a book by its cover. So I read your first chapter and to my surprise I got really into it, I became so interested in your story that before I knew i was on the last chapter you updated. So I have to say it's a really interesting idea and Characters are well written I'm looking forward to where you take, it so please continue to release new chapter as soon as you can 😁😁😁 Thank you

Its actually a really good novel with a grammar that can be considered as masterclass in webnovel, so far I'm liking the mc's personality though you also need to mention his motivation, story development is going good but I'm also hoping for a time skip in near chapters, and also you should focus some more on mc's power development a little more as right now his still very weak, the love interest is also going good as you're taking you're time so it wont be forced and well they are still young anyway, and I'm also hoping you wont mess up the fanfic by doing one of the fanfic taboo's such as NTR or making mc subservient to someone, like him joining rias's peerage, unlike some dxd fanfic i hope you don't do that just for the mc to join the rating game against riser as you can just eliminate him outside of rating games, and when you do go to other worlds and compare the power level i hope you don't mess it up like many other fanfics as that just makes readers annoyed, you can ask your readers when comparing if you aren't sure and don't follow battle wiki as that's just messed up from what I think, the only issue so far in this fanfic is the update stability, if you update so late readers might just forget about it and it will become one of hundred books in library, forgotten, but other than that its a good work so keep it up author [img=recommend]

Honestly the story is starting off very strong most fanfic either skip through childhood or never talk about so this story is unique in that it's doing neither

Story has started extremely strong. Like the way he's building a foundation and relationships in the world and not just jumping straight to Canon. Usually childhood arcs are really boring but this has kept my interest. Also like that he's not another edgelord mc.

I like this but why is your release schedule once or twice a month? Why not weekly? People are likely to forget about your story with such infrequent updates.

I love this novel, thanks author i hope you don’t drop this………………… ………………………………. ………………… ………………………………. ………………… ………………………………. ………………… ……………………………….

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love the fic plz keep writhing

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