A good novel, it has a very good story development. The author writes about the characters, their lives and stories, making the characters have an extra life and not just those who only follow the main character without us even knowing what they are like or their dreams, their past, etc. The only thing that I would say needs to improve is the writing, the first chapters are practically texts, they are not separated into paragraphs which makes it a little difficult to read, but this was resolved in the following chapters. Another thing would be a word here and there that is spelled wrong and many sentences are stuck together, I recommend leaving a space after the period. I recommend for this a program (like Grammarly or something like that) that can help you fixing these writing problems. The development of the world in general is going well too, nothing too big for now as the novel is just starting, but what has already been shown has been shown in a good way for us readers. Overall, I highly recommend it, the novel is just starting and I feel that if the author continues, it will be a great novel.
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