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Na1gel
Na1gelLv49mth
2024-04-03 07:06

well, its a good enough story to read when u have nothing else to read, when i started to read this i was kinda hyped up for seeing somone doing the dragonslayer magic and maybe improve on its system or something, but in the end he just used it as a base and made it unaturaly op so he could spam out every power on the superpower wiki whenever he feelt like it"he takes powers willynilly from all animeverses" but enough about that, lets add some points of intrest so you guys know what ur geting urself into , he is babysitting issie to max, and the body he took over or got who had his own personality b4 mc took it over was apparantly freinds with everyone and their mothers , akeno was a childhood freind he is freinds with grigori he was trainend by sun wukong he is freind with ophis and taimat and at the rate he is going author is going to keep adding random high tier freinds as time goes by lol, the writing itself is meh.. neither good or bad but it feelt like i read a summary then an actual chapter not because of its length or anything but more on how it was written , so "imo" as i said at the start this works when ur extremly boring otherwise i vould not rate this high on the reading list.. this is just my opinion tho

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Chaddts
ChaddtsLv1

Agreed the story is wish fulfillment to the max. Any power he want he just simply does. All the characters are extremely flat and there isn't any conflict between them. Things that should occur don't specifically conversations. Dialog is simply bad all around. I wouldn't waste me time reading this even if the it's written better than broken english.

akasuna123
akasuna123Lv5

so he is a Gary Stu.

Osyozy12345
Osyozy12345Lv3

this is a problem with novels these days is that they don't commit like if you're a dragon slayer be that and develop it pick one or just don't get our hopes up only to use that power once or twice and forget about it

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