Review Detail of LifeGivesYouLemons in Stargate: Harry Potter and Merlin's Legacy
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Decent at the start but personally I didn't like the direction the story took (Chapter 10). Considering it's the chapter with the most comments it's pretty telling how bad most people took it. For those wondering, MC is no longer Harry but something else which I won't spoil. I wouldn't have minded the change if it was done well without losing the MC, but it wasn't and it felt unnecessary to the story considering the knowledge that he already had. It would of probably have been better to have just made an SI or something instead of the change that was made. Kudos to the author though as I think this is like one of the first SG/HP fanfics on here.
Stargate: Harry Potter and Merlin's Legacy
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He still is Harry Potter, I extra wrote it in such a way, just more now. But I wanted to write a Version of Harry Potter that is darker, while not outright changing him from the get and go. So I choose to incoporate it as his Character development in this Story. A Dark more Ruthless, selfish Harry Potter should be also believeable. It is shown and implied in Canon that he was abused, treated like a Servant and similar in his Childhood. He lived trough Voldemort, a whole War, so a darker Version of him after a change is quite reasonable. But I can understand if this isn't for everyone. It's impossible to please everyone, and in the end I write a Story I enjoy writing. There are enough People who like it.