The character interactions feels dead and needs improvement but otherwise, I don't have much to say

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i enjoyed the novel hope it keeps on this pace. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

It feels weirs to read. Too many metaphorical descriptions with quite a lot being repeated. Some important parts are hard to understand. Then there are things that don't make sense at all. Like him having godly technological and hacking skills, having a completely loyal butler like an old friend just days after he hired him, buying a mansion that out of nowhere has a dieing Yggdrasil tree in the backyard. I stopped reading when the Djinn equips are explained and stopped after reading that he now has a weaker version of Baals flames, which would be no flame at all since Baal was a lightning Djinn.The idea is actually quite good but the writing doesn't fit the genre in my opinion and some things don't make sense. Maybe you can redo some things since the story didn't really start yet. The potential is there.

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