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Not_ayin
Not_ayinLv41yr
2023-11-25 21:24

I like the story so far.. especially the MC's personality since to me he sounds like a chill dude, You're pacing is good to me since I understood all that happened, but one thing I suggest is to put the meaning of French words that are relevant to the plot in the bottom since most of us are too lazy to google it up, characters are also fleshed out and aren't just made in China copy paste cut out personalities. you're grammar is also good even though you said it's your third language. I also noticed that the fanfic has a romance tag, I recommend going monogamy and having just a single partner since harems aren't usually all that romantic. I also suggest Furina as a love interests, I would like to see more fanfics with her as one. overall I like it and give it a 5 star, please don't drop. [img=More pls]

Genshin Impact: Detective System

TidalMajesty
4.6
6 Chs

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Alibi_Lullaby
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The world details are flushed out and the characters actually have a depths and not just a cardboard cutout. plus the Grammar is good so I can't wait for more chapters. aside from those basic things the premise of the story seems interesting and I can't wait to see how it progresses

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RikuKage
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overall, I really like the story. However, you're making Fortaine look like a joke. Trust me, I get it. I'm honestly looking forward to more of your story. Especially want to see more of Furina

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Thir
ThirLv4

It's a very good detective history, if you like them then this may be of your liking.

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Freeman_net
Freeman_netLv1

The best!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!don't give up the story

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Doragon_Kraken
Doragon_KrakenLv4

The writting is good ,i Can see myself Reading this for a long Time should the update be regular.....keep it UP....this is Good.

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ReverieRover
ReverieRoverLv4

This story was certainly a surprise for me since I had a hard time looking for good Genshin Impact fics. What I have read so far has been a phenomenal story and I just love the concept of all the detective stuff. Not sure how to feel about the system Xander has along with the symbiote since those can be hit or miss depending how outlandish it could get like making your protagonist overpowered all of a sudden but that’s just my personal opinion. For a first case it was quite good. A great way to start off your story and I am excited to see what you got planned next. I hope that Xander doesn’t just stay in Fontaine because I would love to see him become a world famous detective if possible. As for your next chapter update I’ll leave you with this.

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True_Vanity
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Meta0202
Meta0202Lv3

everything would be fine if there weren't A LOT OF UNNECESSARY AND USELESS CONVERSATIONS WITH BORING CHARACTERS............... .............. .............. .............. ..............

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uno_31
uno_31Lv3

Muy bien inicio, con personaje bien trabajados que se nota que son parte del mundo de genshin, el personaje principal no es molesto ni es un garristu Aunque no esplican que tanto sabe del mundo o si sabe

1yr
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