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RikuKage
RikuKageLv41yr
2023-11-14 10:35

overall, I really like the story. However, you're making Fortaine look like a joke. Trust me, I get it. I'm honestly looking forward to more of your story. Especially want to see more of Furina

Genshin Impact: Detective System

TidalMajesty
4.8
6 Chs

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TidalMajesty
TidalMajestyAuthor

Yeah, I'll definitely bump them up a bit in the future chapters. The law enforcement at least, not sure about the common citizens, they do tend to be pretty stupid and naive most of the time.

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RikuKage
RikuKageLv4

I get it. For a city with one of the most technological advancements, it kind of dumb that they fail to meet higher standing of what they city is supposed to be based on. Justice. I mean, come on, they literally got robots walking the street. Let's not even talk about the aquabus.

TidalMajesty:Yeah, I'll definitely bump them up a bit in the future chapters. The law enforcement at least, not sure about the common citizens, they do tend to be pretty stupid and naive most of the time.
1yr
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RikuKage
RikuKageLv4

Also, any thoughts on the sidekick/assistant for Furina.

TidalMajesty:Yeah, I'll definitely bump them up a bit in the future chapters. The law enforcement at least, not sure about the common citizens, they do tend to be pretty stupid and naive most of the time.
1yr
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LunaKindred
LunaKindredLv3

I hope its furina and clorinde as MC's harem

TidalMajesty:Yeah, I'll definitely bump them up a bit in the future chapters. The law enforcement at least, not sure about the common citizens, they do tend to be pretty stupid and naive most of the time.
1yr
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the_banana_catfrfr
the_banana_catfrfrLv1

hmmm

TidalMajesty:Yeah, I'll definitely bump them up a bit in the future chapters. The law enforcement at least, not sure about the common citizens, they do tend to be pretty stupid and naive most of the time.
11mth
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Jovanni_Gonzalez
Jovanni_GonzalezLv4

I wonder how you’ll handle the new characters from Fontaine like Chevreuse and Chiori. Apprehending dangerous criminals is part of Chevreuse’s job and from what I remember I think Chiori also helped her sometimes like an informant maybe? Anyway I wanted to know when will you release a new chapter?

10mth
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Jovanni_Gonzalez
Jovanni_GonzalezLv4

Hey are you going to release any new chapters soon? I’m really excited to see what you got planned for next!

9mth
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RikuKage
RikuKageLv4

Are you talking about my story or this guy's story I reviewed?

Jovanni_Gonzalez:Hey are you going to release any new chapters soon? I’m really excited to see what you got planned for next!
9mth
Jovanni_Gonzalez
Jovanni_GonzalezLv4

TidalMajesty, will you release a new chapter soon? It’s been like 5 months since your last chapter. Have you forgotten this story?

7mth
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Jovanni_Gonzalez
Jovanni_GonzalezLv4

Will there be any new chapters or is this story abandoned? Can you please respond.

4mth
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Jovanni_Gonzalez
Jovanni_GonzalezLv4

Are you going to release any new chapters? It’s been forever since your last one and I would really like to read more if possible please.

TidalMajesty:Yeah, I'll definitely bump them up a bit in the future chapters. The law enforcement at least, not sure about the common citizens, they do tend to be pretty stupid and naive most of the time.
4mth
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Alibi_Lullaby
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The world details are flushed out and the characters actually have a depths and not just a cardboard cutout. plus the Grammar is good so I can't wait for more chapters. aside from those basic things the premise of the story seems interesting and I can't wait to see how it progresses

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Thir
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It's a very good detective history, if you like them then this may be of your liking.

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Freeman_net
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The best!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!don't give up the story

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Doragon_Kraken
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The writting is good ,i Can see myself Reading this for a long Time should the update be regular.....keep it UP....this is Good.

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Jovanni_Gonzalez
Jovanni_GonzalezLv4

This story was certainly a surprise for me since I had a hard time looking for good Genshin Impact fics. What I have read so far has been a phenomenal story and I just love the concept of all the detective stuff. Not sure how to feel about the system Xander has along with the symbiote since those can be hit or miss depending how outlandish it could get like making your protagonist overpowered all of a sudden but that’s just my personal opinion. For a first case it was quite good. A great way to start off your story and I am excited to see what you got planned next. I hope that Xander doesn’t just stay in Fontaine because I would love to see him become a world famous detective if possible. As for your next chapter update I’ll leave you with this.

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uno_31
uno_31Lv2

Muy bien inicio, con personaje bien trabajados que se nota que son parte del mundo de genshin, el personaje principal no es molesto ni es un garristu Aunque no esplican que tanto sabe del mundo o si sabe

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Adler9
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Unfortunate_Ending
Unfortunate_EndingLv14

give me more!...….........................

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