The world details are flushed out and the characters actually have a depths and not just a cardboard cutout. plus the Grammar is good so I can't wait for more chapters. aside from those basic things the premise of the story seems interesting and I can't wait to see how it progresses

overall, I really like the story. However, you're making Fortaine look like a joke. Trust me, I get it. I'm honestly looking forward to more of your story. Especially want to see more of Furina

It's a very good detective history, if you like them then this may be of your liking.

The best!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!don't give up the story

The writting is good ,i Can see myself Reading this for a long Time should the update be regular.....keep it UP....this is Good.

This story was certainly a surprise for me since I had a hard time looking for good Genshin Impact fics. What I have read so far has been a phenomenal story and I just love the concept of all the detective stuff. Not sure how to feel about the system Xander has along with the symbiote since those can be hit or miss depending how outlandish it could get like making your protagonist overpowered all of a sudden but that’s just my personal opinion. For a first case it was quite good. A great way to start off your story and I am excited to see what you got planned next. I hope that Xander doesn’t just stay in Fontaine because I would love to see him become a world famous detective if possible. As for your next chapter update I’ll leave you with this.

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everything would be fine if there weren't A LOT OF UNNECESSARY AND USELESS CONVERSATIONS WITH BORING CHARACTERS............... .............. .............. .............. ..............

Muy bien inicio, con personaje bien trabajados que se nota que son parte del mundo de genshin, el personaje principal no es molesto ni es un garristu Aunque no esplican que tanto sabe del mundo o si sabe