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Review Detail of Darkstel in Prison School +Plus

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Perhaps the most enjoyable to read is your work because of the limitations for the character. Your basic concept of abandoning the System, desires and other "worthy" creative factors of other writers, with which they either try to cover up their shortcomings or are simply incompetent in execution, which personally causes me a phobia and disgust. I know there are exceptions, but I have to sort through a bunch of shit to find creative diamonds. In this I will give you a plus. but here's your approach to the characters....I understand and even approve when a character is cynical, logical, and even moderately cruel, but not to extremes. Plus, in harems, I believe in the principle of "terrible with enemies and competitors and as soft as the personality allows with girls," hence the outright disgust for the character of One Punch Man and dislike for the analogue of One Piece. The second point is the advantage of the MC level with not the best sexual realizations of the compulsion fetish. This is purely my personal view and dislike, even in this situation I appreciate that you have limited the development of characters to their worlds without any "crutches" It's funny that I like a story that takes place in a dark world with its cruelties and a sea of sexual fetishes by default, but: firstly, the author's distortion to the dark side is not visible when the world is already dark and cruel. Secondly, Kiyoshi is either because of SI or "memory of the first passage'' has changes that make it interesting in terms of waiting for something new (and loses in the naivety of the original). Thirdly, he is limited in his physical actions and the presence of strong characters around him, which will reduce the risks of MC. Fourthly, the soft part of Kiyoshi's original is felt in communicating with girls, and at least he does not think like a complete selfish creature. Fifthly, this is a harem, which is rare in this world and Kiyoshi himself, unlike the original, is not fixated on one girl, which is a plus.

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Prison School +Plus

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InstaMoist
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I saw your review while stalking your profile, but it didn't appear in my fanfiction. Possibly, this is a bug. First of all, thank you for the compliment. I truly do not deserve it. To be honest, I don't dislike systems and such. I just don't have a strong enough memory to remember all those numbers and skills. The rest is exactly as you said. Another thing that surprised me was that I didn't expect you to read my other fanfiction. Sorry I can't respond to the rest, but thank you for your positive review.