Review Detail of SIREXSQUISITE_ in A RipperDoc in Cyberpunk

I enjoyed the premise, but the story feels like they put it in chatgpt about these set pript of what the story is about and nothing else. It is everything to build a good story, but it is missing a big flavor. That of which is just flavor. This pulls as much as a piece of plain wheat bread.But in all seriousness, it just needs to step back and flesh out all the ideas here, like the failed doctor and the edgerunner. Show me and put me in their shoes of how they are something and not just give me a they are this with no background. It was like dexter DeShawn showing up and saying he is the best fixer in nightcity while being a nomad. I don't know them other than what we got, and that is very little. However like previously stated, it is a good canvas of a story they just need more meat to them, and I'm glad about seeing cyberpunk fanfics. And I hope to see more growth out of this author and their other works and this one.