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SIREXSQUISITE_2mthCommentedCh 42 Theron's Watchers- SIREXSQUISITE_2mthCommented
dog got hit with a tree he need to be dead
The massive tree connected with a resounding thud, knocking the bandits off their feet and sending them tumbling across the forest floor. The impact was decisive, leaving the attackers in a heap, dazed and disoriented by the force of Vargus's counterstrike. - SIREXSQUISITE_3mthCommentedCh 67 The One Calling the Shots
- SIREXSQUISITE_3mthCommentedCh 65 Sandwich Rods
- SIREXSQUISITE_5mthCommented
I like it
What do you think of it? - SIREXSQUISITE_5mthPosted
I enjoyed the premise, but the story feels like they put it in chatgpt about these set pript of what the story is about and nothing else. It is everything to build a good story, but it is missing a big flavor. That of which is just flavor. This pulls as much as a piece of plain wheat bread.But in all seriousness, it just needs to step back and flesh out all the ideas here, like the failed doctor and the edgerunner. Show me and put me in their shoes of how they are something and not just give me a they are this with no background. It was like dexter DeShawn showing up and saying he is the best fixer in nightcity while being a nomad. I don't know them other than what we got, and that is very little. However like previously stated, it is a good canvas of a story they just need more meat to them, and I'm glad about seeing cyberpunk fanfics. And I hope to see more growth out of this author and their other works and this one.
- SIREXSQUISITE_5mthCommentedCh 24 Chapter 23
- SIREXSQUISITE_6mthCommented"Let me show you."
- SIREXSQUISITE_8mthCommented
it is a good song
Does anyone even look at this lol. - SIREXSQUISITE_9mthReplied to chrnocross
Ditto.
Why is this here? Because I enjoy writing, and some people seem to enjoy my jumbled ramblings on other sites like Royal Road and Webnovel enough to donate towards them. That seems wild to me, but it's not my place to dictate what people can and cannot like, eh? Take note. Under no circumstance will I hold fanwork hostage behind a paywall. I am grateful for anyone who wishes to support me, and I WILL NOT ever delay anything because I feel like I'm not being paid enough. I've seen people lose themselves to that big-fish, small-pond egomania and it's ugly. - SIREXSQUISITE_9mthCommentedCh 50 Dragon Slayer (4)
- SIREXSQUISITE_9mthCommented
yes
Anyway, is it better for the memory echoes to be narrated like this instead of imitating what happens in the game? - SIREXSQUISITE_9mthReplied to Peace12345
if only the dude didn't beat the doors off you.
And he quickly put two and two together because sparks began flickering off his body. - SIREXSQUISITE_9mthCommented
I really like the setup and development so far, and I would like it to continue.
Option A: The story continues and this arc ends in the next chapter, beginning the yharnam arc. - SIREXSQUISITE_9mthCommented
Thanks
(Story Recap for those who choose to skip the NSFW Chapters: M'rissi is revealed to have the same whip scars along her back as MC. Also, M'rissi admits that she consulted Inigo on how to make MC her's.) - SIREXSQUISITE_9mthReplied to Jhunior_ll
that look like it is from northern blade...
Representing China was Li-Fen, with her eyes closed, patiently waiting for the meeting to begin. She stood out for her mastery of martial arts, leading one of the largest groups of cyber-martial artists in Asia. She was an attractive mature woman wearing a traditional black Chinese dress with golden embroidery, revealing her voluminous and muscular thighs, which were abruptly replaced by the cold metal of her cyberware, looking like armor on her powerful legs. - SIREXSQUISITE_10mthCommented
clout to sway or influence.
"I do not exactly have the cream of the crop available to me," Ashe defended herself. "As I have said before, I do not have as much clout within the Inquisition as I would like. Hopefully, you will help me change that. - SIREXSQUISITE_10mthCommented
420 lol
Thankfully, Ashe came to save Octus and Violet before they could continue questioning everything they thought they knew about the Mechanicus, "Please, try not to pay too much mind to him. IV-20 is eccentric even amongst the Mechanicus. He was nearly excommunicated for his… unique ideas regarding sacred incense and its uses in the various rites of maintenance." - SIREXSQUISITE_10mthCommentedMiss Valentine was now pissed from being ignored, "Stop Ignoring me… How are you doing this bastard? I'm over 10,000…" but before she could finish her sentence, she was sent flying toward the explosive booger shot by Mr 5."Yuck! Who uses his nose boogers as weapons?" Luffy questioned, looking disgusted.
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I'm not mad, but aren't there fronks on these cars since it is a rear motor car?
Intrigued and concerned about what had happened to Wrench, Greyson turned his head to the back of the car, noticing Wrench's two metal legs and the lone remaining arm. Hearing Sora's voice, he added, "I had to make some RE-cuts on Wrench to fit him in the trunk; this car has a really small one!"