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Febfew
FebfewLv111mthFebfew

Author, please tell me the formula on how to consciously reject being in the top 30~50 fanfics with powers stones. You let the chance pass you by 4 times, 5 with this one.

Multiple Talents in Naruto World

Logical_Dot

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Logical_Dot
Logical_DotAuthorLogical_Dot

Ohk! I like to write what I like and think, and I know that it can't be liked by everyone. If it fails, then it fails. I will just learn and continue to write more.

Febfew:I'm saying that this fanfic was supposed to be your 5th success because the premise of 5 of your fanfics (including this one) are very good, but you poorly developed the plot of 4 of them and you're close to failing with this one too. And honestly it seems to me that you are making a mistake on purpose. I'm using google translator...
Logical_Dot
Logical_DotAuthorLogical_Dot

? I don't understand what you are trying to say.

Febfew
FebfewLv11Febfew

I'm saying that this fanfic was supposed to be your 5th success because the premise of 5 of your fanfics (including this one) are very good, but you poorly developed the plot of 4 of them and you're close to failing with this one too. And honestly it seems to me that you are making a mistake on purpose. I'm using google translator...

Logical_Dot:? I don't understand what you are trying to say.