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Mithren
MithrenLv121yr
2023-11-21 15:39

This story is worth checking out. The writing feels like that of a developing writer. This means it's got some obvious flaws but these flaws are tolerable and I've found the writer willing to take feedback. This means that the writing and story will likely just get better and better with time.To the author: This is your story. This means that it's up to you to decide what feedback is worth listening to and what's not worth it. It's okay to make mistakes and honestly even the best writers still make plenty of mistakes. Just keep writing and improving your craft

Doomsday, Let's Open A Restaurant

Adam_2023
4.4
424 Chs

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EnablingBarley
EnablingBarleyLv14

not much else to add, since i feel the same.Keep up the good work Author San.

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Chewyrice
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A great novel to be reading. It's going good so far, I hope it stays like this until the end. This is a great find for me, as most novel doesn't get me interested in the first 10 chapters.

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Autumn_4crocus
Autumn_4crocusLv13

I like the story so far.nothing too op but also not too weak.just needs more updates

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DaoistHarvey
DaoistHarveyLv13

I give it a rating of 3.8, it's decent read with some flaws that can be annoying but it's not bad. The deal breaker was at ch 22 where || SPOILER SPOILER DON'T READ IF YOU DON'T WANT TO GET SPOILED|| the mc saved a zombie that had some relationship with which causes innocent survivors to get infected and the rescue team (rescue team got greedy with wanting to take the zombie that the mc wants), I think there could've been a better ending if rescue team didn't get greedy but from my perspective, if they could get that zombie, researchers can research more about zombies and will maybe help everyone. MC could've also shouted and use his reputation as the owner of the restaurant. Overall it's decent read but I'm fine not reading more, nothing very unique with it.

7mth
Adam_H9
Adam_H9Lv14

Continue to write. Don’t stop writing

1yr
EveStar_Origin
EveStar_OriginLv12

I had only read till 49. so far it was worth it. like some said, there's some minor flaw but story wise it was entertaining. world setting wise, I should probably not give 4 since there's nothing much told except the city, several shelter etc. even power setting, zombies, etc was not mentioned much. though it does make a good face slap when those haugty arrogant 'officials' trying to 'take down potential threats'. i mean, it was satisfying to see them fail since they gave a 'good image' while in fact they rotten corrupt type. so with that regard, the novel could take Villain troupe route, though not sure how author planned it. sigh there's only so much I could review since I only read so far. at the very least it was an entertaining read. anyway, it's definitely worth checking out.

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Wumpus92
Wumpus92Lv15

just under 500 chapters. good story, good pace with a decent MC. I do recommend this story!

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Ovito
OvitoLv11

Good Novel

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auraofguerra
auraofguerraLv4

i never give full mark in anything that match good it is

9mth
Lenard_Xroo
Lenard_XrooLv3

Good idea, bad execution. He could've upgraded his evolution tier, focusing on himself and the restaurant, but spends most of his energy on external tools, such as in the latest chapters, too reluctant to increase his abilities' tier but spends millions of energy to modify a zombie -_-

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