Review Detail of _DreamWeaver in Ravenwood manor
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Wow, what can I say?... The first chapter looks like a work written by a top notch traditional writer, the grammar and intricate storytelling is indeed quite intriguing, however, author might need to reduce his paragraph length as it can be a bit much to get through ( maybe 4-5 lines per paragraph )The story has a lot to offer and I might be biased considering anything Lovecraft with Victorian era setting and perhaps even steampunk with a touch of mystery draws me in instantly.Also I'm writing something similar so yeah.Regardless, this work is truly amazing and as long as author makes slight adjustments, it has the potential to go a long way.So good luck author and done give up!
Ravenwood manor
Donabuis_Cronus
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Well thank you very much this is my first take on something like this all though I must admit most of the work is due to the fact I know how to use ai extremely well and set a very large foundation for it to build with and off along side me though I do put in some sections to make it more smooth as well as it’s my first try at a smaller novel in hopes to finish it as well as a traditional non fantasy or maga themed novel so if you have any recommendations I’d be glad to hear
AI, really ?... And here I was praising you for creating a masterpiece, my bad, I retract my review, enjoy your writing journey.
Donabuis_Cronus:Well thank you very much this is my first take on something like this all though I must admit most of the work is due to the fact I know how to use ai extremely well and set a very large foundation for it to build with and off along side me though I do put in some sections to make it more smooth as well as it’s my first try at a smaller novel in hopes to finish it as well as a traditional non fantasy or maga themed novel so if you have any recommendations I’d be glad to hear