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2023-11-26 01:41

Nice topic for your book but I do want to remind you that being so far from any practicality will soon leave you without a plot to take the story forward. Anyone who has grown up in a democracy knows that no matter how powerful you become, unless a politician has complete domination, not 40-60 or 50-50, he can never act as your M.C. is acting. Be a bit more practical in your approach. Best of luck.

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