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maddymudda
maddymuddaLv21yr
2023-11-26 01:41

Nice topic for your book but I do want to remind you that being so far from any practicality will soon leave you without a plot to take the story forward. Anyone who has grown up in a democracy knows that no matter how powerful you become, unless a politician has complete domination, not 40-60 or 50-50, he can never act as your M.C. is acting. Be a bit more practical in your approach. Best of luck.

India: First PM of India

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Subhadip_Dutta
Subhadip_DuttaLv12

please continue atleast it's a good story and first time any authour wrote about being leader of India I would love to see our dream INDIA JAI HIND

1yr

SnowyTempest
SnowyTempestLv3

Keep up the great work. I understand this is more wish fulfilment than anything and the author is venting and allowing us to vent too. I just humbly request the author to not monetize this and keep it free for everyone to see. I am just a student and don't have the funds nor the freedom to financially support this treasure and can only do so in spirit. Lots of love to the author. P.S. I hope you write another fic like thid but on a more serious note. ohh and the guilds were and unexpected twist. loved the idea and the unis too like nalanda oof. tho not really sure of indic as Indian languages are pretty diverse I understand the need and pros of a national language. once again kudos and lots of love.

1yr
YourDad_
YourDad_Lv4

Okay, it is good. I half expected it to be filled with büII$híts, but I am wrong. Author knows what he is doing and his knowledge of History and International relations is good as well. Though he could work a little on polity aspect as that's not how it works and by introducing so many new things just after coming out of Jail is not a wise decision. He does not know who is a friend who is a foe. That's a sure shot way to get assassinated. Other than that it's decent

8mth
SuryaputraKarna
SuryaputraKarnaLv4

Bharat Mata ki Jai! Please continue writing your novel it has a high potential

1yr
Chirashu_Jindal
Chirashu_JindalLv4

Hey author shouldn’t you use Sanskrit as the official languages as all Indian languages are derived from Sanskrit and it is most scientific appropriation language?

1yr
Suroj_34
Suroj_34Lv1

It is better to develop the country together and take it towards super power without spreading hatred between Hindus and Muslims First Indian writer writing for Indian and I like it very much now everyone is loving it please write more we all support I am 💪speaking from Bengal

11mth
Mister_Robot
Mister_RobotLv4

why did you stop??? please continue. there are reviews accusing this story of being pro-Hindutva etc. but should the author be allowed to express his views through their novel? you are more than welcome to write one as well. The beauty of democracy is such that everyone can voice their opinion. I'm a North Eastern Christian tribal and I don't mind when opinions clash, please continue writing it.

10mth
race_sins77
race_sins77Lv14

I like it brother please continue it as soon as possible

10mth
tanush_kumar
tanush_kumarLv3

please continue... very good start[img=update]

1yr
Heart_Crown
Heart_CrownLv4

total thrash MC and there is no character development 😔 as mc was literally locked 🔒 up in jail for nearly 25 years . this is so stupid that I have gone bonkers and now regretting as why I even started to read this no brainer thingy .

8mth
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