Review Detail of DotComplex in Starks of Winterfell

Item: Starks of Winterfell
Rating: 3

Review detail

DotComplexLv26mthDotComplex

5 for writing quality and character design, because this story gets those two things right, 1 star for story development and world background. The story plays out like a wall street financers wet dream, Robb randomly invents the printing press with no previous required technology in a medieval world, creates like 3 new business models out of nowhere, some guy from Braavos gives comes to him and gives him the method for double-book accounting, a random Maester under him discovers crop rotation and it TRIPLES production. The most plot armoured wishful thinking I've ever seen. Don't even get me started on the Maesters. He takes away dozens of Maesters from the citadel and no one does anything about it, is this even Game of Thrones anymore?

Starks of Winterfell

Om_4890

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SagaLF11Lv1SagaLF11

thank you

6mth

whyudothat_Lv4whyudothat_

One of the things I hate in reading isekai fic is when mc introduces a new technology without recognizing the backlash. Also, why invent the printing press? it's only a matter of time before dangerous ideas begin to spread.

6mth

TranshumanistLv14Transhumanist

Seriously the most worthless GoT stories I've read were those that did these kinds of wild technological uplifts.

6mth

FebfewLv10Febfew

If it were a reincarnated person introducing these technologies, I wouldn't say anything, but that would be absurd. And there are other absurd facilities described in the reviews. With so many facilities, any trash can be the MC and do whatever they want.

5mth