5 for writing quality and character design, because this story gets those two things right, 1 star for story development and world background. The story plays out like a wall street financers wet dream, Robb randomly invents the printing press with no previous required technology in a medieval world, creates like 3 new business models out of nowhere, some guy from Braavos gives comes to him and gives him the method for double-book accounting, a random Maester under him discovers crop rotation and it TRIPLES production. The most plot armoured wishful thinking I've ever seen. Don't even get me started on the Maesters. He takes away dozens of Maesters from the citadel and no one does anything about it, is this even Game of Thrones anymore?

The scope is impressive. Author is not shy of making use of different character POV’s. I like the general vibe of how the plot. Unique plot-wise, always fun to see a new creative take. You get some broken English at times but who cares lol. I wonder how this story will develop ?

I mean, story is forced af. Everything literally just happens conveniently for mc :D I'm 100% sure if mc started to walk towards sea, he would first step on rocks, then dolphins, icebergs and whatnot, crossing sea on foot to essos. Writing quality is pretty mediocre. I'm still reading it because I just want to read some op kingdom building right now, and I happen to be in mood that all this doesn't bother me. Usually it would.

A eally nice story, but you are forgetting to use the, his, her, etc...

This is one if not the best ff out there. The quality is very good and immersive. I can't wait for it to finish. Don't drop it author!.

Excelente historia las divergencias del canon permiten una historia diferente a la del siempre principe JON prometido el desarrollo del reino no es tedioso o en exceso plasmado tiene saltos de tiempo cortos lo que permite que la historia se desenvuelva rápidamente magnifico trabajo

Good work bro, keep it up and please don't drop this work[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]Nt: Sorry if the grammar is bad I use google translate

Wonderful storyline. Good character development and interesting plot twist. Can’t wait for updates. Highly recommend

Everything is forced in this story, the dialogue, the unfolding of the story, he annoys me with the fact that he can't tell his father that he's a Stark and not an Arryn, he acts like a male version of Mary Sue, everything goes his way and no one notices him when he wants to .

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