Item: Starks of Winterfell
Rating: 2
Author: asdasdssf

asdasdssfLv11yr

2023-11-21 05:26

I mean, story is forced af. Everything literally just happens conveniently for mc :D I'm 100% sure if mc started to walk towards sea, he would first step on rocks, then dolphins, icebergs and whatnot, crossing sea on foot to essos. Writing quality is pretty mediocre. I'm still reading it because I just want to read some op kingdom building right now, and I happen to be in mood that all this doesn't bother me. Usually it would.

Starks of Winterfell

Om_4890

4.4

36 Chs

Liked by 8 people

Replies7

YaYaYa47Lv11

you have any recommendations of good asoiaf fanfic?

1yr

CosmicStardust25Lv4

Baratheon The schemer is a great fic to read, also if you can bear bad grammar a but, A knights journey in Westeros.

YaYaYa47:you have any recommendations of good asoiaf fanfic?

1yr

RegalObscureLv4

The ending is bad, really really bad. Ruined the whole ff.

CosmicStardust25:Baratheon The schemer is a great fic to read, also if you can bear bad grammar a but, A knights journey in Westeros.

10mth

RegalObscureLv4

trial and tabulations of oathkeeper.

YaYaYa47:you have any recommendations of good asoiaf fanfic?

10mth

RegalObscureLv4

Dragon of Duskdale. Rheagar the Ruthless. (complete) Stone by stone (incomlplete).

YaYaYa47:you have any recommendations of good asoiaf fanfic?

10mth

DadguyDaveLv14

Path of the Hungry Bear is complete and both realiatic(ish) and well written. A Targaryan Awakens is a pretty good star wars xover with Jon Snow MC.

YaYaYa47:you have any recommendations of good asoiaf fanfic?

9mth

RegalObscureLv4

Thank you. Although the ending is super rushed and ruined that ff but it is now my all time favourite.👍👍👍

DadguyDave:Path of the Hungry Bear is complete and both realiatic(ish) and well written. A Targaryan Awakens is a pretty good star wars xover with Jon Snow MC.

7mth

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DotComplexLv3

5 for writing quality and character design, because this story gets those two things right, 1 star for story development and world background. The story plays out like a wall street financers wet dream, Robb randomly invents the printing press with no previous required technology in a medieval world, creates like 3 new business models out of nowhere, some guy from Braavos gives comes to him and gives him the method for double-book accounting, a random Maester under him discovers crop rotation and it TRIPLES production. The most plot armoured wishful thinking I've ever seen. Don't even get me started on the Maesters. He takes away dozens of Maesters from the citadel and no one does anything about it, is this even Game of Thrones anymore?

1yr

ssyffixLv4

The scope is impressive. Author is not shy of making use of different character POV’s. I like the general vibe of how the plot. Unique plot-wise, always fun to see a new creative take. You get some broken English at times but who cares lol. I wonder how this story will develop ?

1yr

DasSchwotzLv15

A eally nice story, but you are forgetting to use the, his, her, etc...

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Order66SurvivorLv4

This is one if not the best ff out there. The quality is very good and immersive. I can't wait for it to finish. Don't drop it author!.

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daniel_veraLv1

Excelente historia las divergencias del canon permiten una historia diferente a la del siempre principe JON prometido el desarrollo del reino no es tedioso o en exceso plasmado tiene saltos de tiempo cortos lo que permite que la historia se desenvuelva rápidamente magnifico trabajo

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Edge_Lord357Lv4

Good work bro, keep it up and please don't drop this work[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]Nt: Sorry if the grammar is bad I use google translate

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otaku4life55Lv14

Wonderful storyline. Good character development and interesting plot twist. Can’t wait for updates. Highly recommend

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Little_ElLv3

Everything is forced in this story, the dialogue, the unfolding of the story, he annoys me with the fact that he can't tell his father that he's a Stark and not an Arryn, he acts like a male version of Mary Sue, everything goes his way and no one notices him when he wants to .

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Sanjay12Lv12

Excellent👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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