Fabulous story, there are all the cauchor boxes, on the other hand 2 huge problems *********************************************************** 1: chapters too long I think that by cutting to 1500word we can make 10 chapters with the current three. ********************************************************** 2: and that's the biggest problem, it's going too fast, I know there are 8 or 10 seasons of SG1 but still in ten chapters (2 years) before even the start of the story, it's already ultra op, it will create boredom quickly for sure. Fortunately you say you have almost finished the story which is reassuring, but will the quality remain...?
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Hello, thank you for the review.1- I don't like writing such short chapters; it takes more time to edit them.2- Only the readers can say that. I've edited up to chapter 18 in Spanish, and they are already published on Wattpad and YouTube. I had also published them in English up to chapter 14 or 15, but the translation was incorrect, so I deleted them. Now I'm taking the opportunity to correct and remove unnecessary or redundant things. If someone has read it in Spanish, they can give their opinion about it.
sorry I have no knowledge of Spanish, and I hate wattpad automatic translation is impossible
