Item: Twilight : Justice for Jacob
Rating: 3.8
Author: Blueflameh

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2024-11-17 23:01

It’s an alright fanfiction, honestly not bad but not my cup of tea. The pacing of the story feels like you’re reviewing a movie by fast forwarding the slightly less but still important parts while only hitting the main plot points. So it takes a lot from the potential of the story. It’s how I imagine my own fanfic writing feels the others. Where you get the main points but not much passed that. So overall not bad, but I’m not going to say it’s good. Pretty mid but overall if you enjoy twilight you might enjoy it, if you don’t like twilight then… I’d say you can go without reading this.

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