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Andrew_Micucci
Andrew_MicucciLv158mth
2024-05-14 20:12

This story starts out pretty great until around chap 88 where there are four chaps that make no sense and then huge jumps of days and important skips like turning his brothers and running out of food over all starts great but feels like the author gave up around chapter 90 or 100

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Dexter_Sled_1111
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Thanks for the review. Also, i thought to signify the time skip in the dialogue... sigh...

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