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2023-10-26 05:12

Thus far i really enjoy the story and the aspect that it is consistant but i have also asked several questions about the story and the author has answered them in a satisfactory way. I truly anticipate the future endevours of Dexter and i am equally as exhilarated as to what the author has in store for us in the upcomming chapters. Continue doing a good job with the book and as you mentioned in your own review, you have some ways to go in making a flowing story through writing like some of the top books, but that can only be learnt with practice, so just keep up what you have been doing and you will soon be there.

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Thanks for the review! :)Not gonna let us down. [img=recommend][img=recommend]

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