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2024-04-05 08:41

I really enjoy this author's novels. I would like to receive more frequent updates, but the quality of the writing is very enjoyable and the characters feel very alive. Highly recommended.

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Just caught up. I don't read HP fics that much so i don't know how it fares compared to the other ones but regardless of that i think this is pretty good. The story is pretty slow paced though and looking at chapter dates your update schedule won't help either. So there is a chance people might get bored. This happened to me with your Dance of the Dragons fic. Even though he was not it Old Valyria for long chapter wise or word count wise thanks to the update stability you have going on it felt extremely boring at some point. While reading i found myself disliking the way you wrote Harry. No that's wrong. It's his strength i don't like. While i like that he isn't a god like sorcerer from the start, because that would get boring pretty fast, he has the Six Eyes. I am not that knowledgeable about Jujutsu kaisen as i have not read the manga neither have i watched the second season of the anime however i do know that Six Eyes is a cheat that makes you extremely strong even at a young age thanks to the comments i have read. So i found myself saying "why is he weak" while reading even though it is better that way because he is not weak he is just not as strong he should be. He will probably get actually strong in a couple of years and while that is ok it will take a long time for that to happen and the wait will kill me which, again, brings me to your update schedule. I loved the way you did the characters. Especially Albus. In the few HO fics ive read he was portrayed as evil. Don't have a problem with that but it got boring and it was just not well written. Tho even if you wrote an evil Albus i believe i would've liked because you are a good writer. And the idea of a mix between Jujutsu Kaisen and Harry Potter words is wuite and enjoyable one. Looking forward to see you go deeper into the role of both these words. I assume they have pretty deep lores. I actually gave Updating Stability a one star but then the review itself becames a four star and this book is too good for a four star review. All in all would recommend. While not one of the best things i have read it has 10 chapters so far so might be by the end of it. This is the longest comment i have written in my 20 years so i wanna see you answer to this.

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