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Doom_Night
Doom_NightLv21yr
2023-10-22 21:05

really good start, it has one of the best beginning I have ever seen. 🖤

Naruto : Trickery

Doppins
4.8
124 Chs

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Doppins
DoppinsAuthor

👀 ❤

1yr

Huvnn
HuvnnLv2

I'm not going to lie, it has one of the best stores I've seen in naruto fanfiction. 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

1yr
dammno
dammnoLv2

I am so excited for this one it has everything I want in fanfic . And special the MC of this fanfic he's soo smart and kind of has this cold logic, not goffy and naive like the other MC from other fanfics.

1yr
Mamdouh_mohamed
Mamdouh_mohamedLv12

Sorry, but I can't continue. The writing and narration method is good, and the length of the chapter is also appropriate, and the secondary characters also feel alive in them. They are not just side characters, but they have their depth and meaning just like the mc. The only thing that I do not like and that makes me leave it is that Naruto, despite his suffering for me 12 years of injustice and insults from the village. He did not leave it and leave just because after he became a genin and with the help of the Hokage and Kakashi who silenced the villagers, he no longer had a problem staying. In the canon, Naruto was influenced by Asura chakra, so he was very naive and had no problem. To stay, but here he is smart and not affected by Asura chakra, so it is not reasonable for him to stay in the village after being subjected to injustice for 12 years since his birth just because after he finally gained strength, the villagers could no longer harm him and the Hokage prevented them from disturbing him, but To give the author his due, this is my fair assessment of the novel in my opinion Writing quality 5/5 Update stability 5/5 Story development 2/5 because of what I talked about above Character design 5/5 World wallpaper 5/5

1yr
mondilamoni
mondilamoniLv1

very good start, I like smart naruto. just don't make him naive. ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

1yr
Nonstop_Teen
Nonstop_TeenLv4

A smart Naruto give you a happy fan. Just hope you won't have him make any stupid decisions. The story is great so far and hope it continues to be that say

1yr
chrnocross
chrnocrossLv15

While I was engrossed in the story at the start.. I'm losing interest since Naruto easily outs himself to various characters and then they take advantage of his abilities and skills he constantly reveals to them. He doesn't really act sneakily or as the synopsis or namesake would have you think. He's so "understanding" of these characters who originally forsook or barely did anything for him until he started showing value(which he easily reveals to them even along wifh the fact that he could careless about the village and would leave if he could). That being said the writing quality is good and the world background seems solid for a naruto fanfic.

11mth
roumiolina
roumiolinaLv1

more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more

1yr
sybife
sybifeLv4

Everything is great, keep going author. 🤝🏻

1yr
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