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Mamdouh_mohamed
Mamdouh_mohamedLv1211mth
2024-01-26 18:59

Sorry, but I can't continue. The writing and narration method is good, and the length of the chapter is also appropriate, and the secondary characters also feel alive in them. They are not just side characters, but they have their depth and meaning just like the mc. The only thing that I do not like and that makes me leave it is that Naruto, despite his suffering for me 12 years of injustice and insults from the village. He did not leave it and leave just because after he became a genin and with the help of the Hokage and Kakashi who silenced the villagers, he no longer had a problem staying. In the canon, Naruto was influenced by Asura chakra, so he was very naive and had no problem. To stay, but here he is smart and not affected by Asura chakra, so it is not reasonable for him to stay in the village after being subjected to injustice for 12 years since his birth just because after he finally gained strength, the villagers could no longer harm him and the Hokage prevented them from disturbing him, but To give the author his due, this is my fair assessment of the novel in my opinion Writing quality 5/5 Update stability 5/5 Story development 2/5 because of what I talked about above Character design 5/5 World wallpaper 5/5

Naruto : Trickery

Doppins
4.8
124 Chs

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ChikinBorger
ChikinBorgerLv4

First of all, you can’t just “leave” the village and especially not a jinchuuriki. That is suicide. Second of all, and it’s annoying that EVERYONE always gets this as wrong as thinking Tsunade’s appearance is a transformation, is that Naruto is not affected by Asura’s chakra. Naruto IS Asura. The Sage was very specific about it. Asura’s and Indra’s chakras have incarnated several times, but Naruto and Sasuke are the first and only reincarnations of Asura and Indra.

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Jal25
Jal25Lv2

This is the slowest comment I’ve ever heard but I don’t feel like writing a long reply at the moo

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Doppins
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👀 ❤

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Huvnn
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I'm not going to lie, it has one of the best stores I've seen in naruto fanfiction. 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

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dammno
dammnoLv2

I am so excited for this one it has everything I want in fanfic . And special the MC of this fanfic he's soo smart and kind of has this cold logic, not goffy and naive like the other MC from other fanfics.

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mondilamoni
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very good start, I like smart naruto. just don't make him naive. ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

1yr
Nonstop_Teen
Nonstop_TeenLv4

A smart Naruto give you a happy fan. Just hope you won't have him make any stupid decisions. The story is great so far and hope it continues to be that say

1yr
chrnocross
chrnocrossLv15

While I was engrossed in the story at the start.. I'm losing interest since Naruto easily outs himself to various characters and then they take advantage of his abilities and skills he constantly reveals to them. He doesn't really act sneakily or as the synopsis or namesake would have you think. He's so "understanding" of these characters who originally forsook or barely did anything for him until he started showing value(which he easily reveals to them even along wifh the fact that he could careless about the village and would leave if he could). That being said the writing quality is good and the world background seems solid for a naruto fanfic.

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roumiolina
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more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more

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Doom_Night
Doom_NightLv2

really good start, it has one of the best beginning I have ever seen. 🖤

1yr
sybife
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Everything is great, keep going author. 🤝🏻

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