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Naman_Gyan
Naman_GyanLv11yr
2023-10-05 23:36

Lee as a genin cannot do 10 push ups? He has a father ? I think you should rethink about continuing writing this with such major plotholes. Lee in canon was an orphan and he could do 1000 pushups easily and continue training after that. This is more like a civilian from normal got transmigrated to naruto world with his body.

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Vandalizer
VandalizerAuthor

Well, it's hard for him because of the system, plus it's not full canon.

Vandalizer
VandalizerAuthor

Where does it say that? That he's an orphan? I couldn't find any information about that on the wiki.)

Vandalizer
VandalizerAuthor

maybe you're talking about Guy's dad?

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AKARYUU
AKARYUULv14

That’s guy father not lee

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LoliBuddha
LoliBuddhaLv15

Might Duy is Might Guy’s father not Rock Lee. See how they have different surnames.

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Ilovenovel
IlovenovelLv14

Are you saying that the system is nerfing him? and that without it he can't get stronger? Wow, that sucks, and seriously 10 pushups for a ninja is embarrassing and frankly annoying. even civilians could do more thanks to passive chakra

Vandalizer:Well, it's hard for him because of the system, plus it's not full canon.
Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3

If it could do the same or a little less than the original might I consider reading this, but nerf the MC from the beginning? Nah, it's not my cup of tea

Vandalizer:Well, it's hard for him because of the system, plus it's not full canon.
Bakuboy
BakuboyLv4

did you not read the story properly? the system was exerting pressure on him making even 10 pushups a nigh impossible task. it's not that he's too weak to do 10 pushups. read properly bruh.

Ilovenovel:Are you saying that the system is nerfing him? and that without it he can't get stronger? Wow, that sucks, and seriously 10 pushups for a ninja is embarrassing and frankly annoying. even civilians could do more thanks to passive chakra
DaoistylGhO4
DaoistylGhO4Lv2

please continue this work i like to see lee earth shattering determination to overcome obstacles... it is very a good concept thanks

Ilovenovel
IlovenovelLv14

i didn't read yet, I was reading first the comments. Better safe than sorry, and from what you just said, it seems the system was nerfing him hard

Bakuboy:did you not read the story properly? the system was exerting pressure on him making even 10 pushups a nigh impossible task. it's not that he's too weak to do 10 pushups. read properly bruh.
zohar_asor
zohar_asorLv1

May day is might day's dad not rock li

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Fred_6845
Fred_6845Lv2

Don't believe those comments are pure haters or people who don't know how to read a novel, lee is not getting weaker but at the moment of doing exercises the system makes the difficulty soar and makes it difficult for him to do even 10 pushups because he is under tremendous pressure that the system gives him, for me honestly this is more efficient than doing 1000 pushups it takes less time and you don't have to spend all day training just like the original rock lee did.

Ilovenovel:i didn't read yet, I was reading first the comments. Better safe than sorry, and from what you just said, it seems the system was nerfing him hard
Fred_6845
Fred_6845Lv2

Dude first read the story and then criticize, as you can tell you don't even have a basic understanding of how the system works if you come to a novel to criticize without knowing, then you don't deserve to call yourself even a reader please inform yourself a little before criticizing.

Gabichu_Yeah:If it could do the same or a little less than the original might I consider reading this, but nerf the MC from the beginning? Nah, it's not my cup of tea
Fred_6845
Fred_6845Lv2

Dude I think you are not much of a Naruto fan, besides not reading the novel please do not criticize if you do not even understand how the system helps rock lee you can tell you have not read many fanfics and you skip chapters so do not criticize without knowing, also at no time in the anime is specific that rock lee is an orphan although I can understand your reasoning since his parents were never seen but as this novel is a fanfic the author can add a whole family if he wants since Kishimoto never specific that lee had family or parents so it can be done perfectly well

Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3

????? So why do reviews exist? What you say doesn't make sense because I didn't even make a review, just an observation based on the review. 😮‍💨

Fred_6845:Dude first read the story and then criticize, as you can tell you don't even have a basic understanding of how the system works if you come to a novel to criticize without knowing, then you don't deserve to call yourself even a reader please inform yourself a little before criticizing.
Mahbub2001
Mahbub2001Lv4

Maybe you should have tested whether the review was true and then comment. You shouldn’t comment based on review rather your own experience of reading the fic.

Gabichu_Yeah:????? So why do reviews exist? What you say doesn't make sense because I didn't even make a review, just an observation based on the review. 😮‍💨
InterPlanarGod
InterPlanarGodLv13

it was heavily implied that the exercises under the system have added pressure to them. as in gravity/resistance.

Fred_6845
Fred_6845Lv2

Olvídalo no perdere mi tiempo con alguien que ni siquiera es un lector

Gabichu_Yeah:????? So why do reviews exist? What you say doesn't make sense because I didn't even make a review, just an observation based on the review. 😮‍💨
Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3

You're right, I already forgot

Fred_6845:Olvídalo no perdere mi tiempo con alguien que ni siquiera es un lector
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