Review Detail of XP_HAVOK in Naruto: Legacy of Lava, Ice and Storm

great noveI and depth to the characters but don't forget to flush out other people like his family and teamates and such instead of only using them for plot points its ok to have some general life chapters to add world building it doesn't have to be all training ones to explain where your taking him also the scenes with him trying to convince people with an innocent facade is cringe it comes off like an adult trying to act like a little kid besides that I love the story