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It's a great story with compelling storytelling, but some parts just seem random. Especially the alien recruitment scene. Ed literally should not have had enough time to do intergalactic politics or relief aid while building his organization. The time frame is too short and Ed’s life is on a timer. Other than that the story flows well,
Technomancer in MCU
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The thing is almost all of the organisation stuff and the administration of it was all Alfred's idea. Ed originally wanted to do it all by himself so all that intergalactic aid is all of Alfred's doing. And the time frame being too short, I'll note it down to explain it better in upcoming chapters(I realise now that I might not have done a good job explaining stuff in the beginning but since then I've learned a lot and will endeavour to explain the situation better) Thank you for taking your time for the review!keep reading and toodles!