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2024-03-01 20:47

It was good at first but the longer I read the less understandable it gets. Yuji having a unique power was nice until another character obtained it as well. The pacing is also quite fast. Although, that was understandable cause repeating the OG story would be tiring. But, I hoped that it at least had backstory on how MC died and such. It just got way too fast.

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