Review Detail of Yunick in Multiversal Elden Ring Mercant

the first few chapters were very good 5 stars but after that the author go full paranoid mode and decides to throw oveboard the mercant concept and the mc´s needs to level up killing enemies in other worlds like the other fanfics where the mc has an ER or DS system in other worlds. personally i think the author problem were his goals, he put some power stone goals for extra chapters and he always reached it so he rushed the chapters without thinking, you should take your time while writing if you want to write good stuff.