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First off i would like to point out that english is not my native language so forgive me if i spell or write something wrong. Having said that, i have not seen any grammar or spelling mistake so far in the ff, the mc is kinda ok but ultimately very bland due to the fact that we know nothing about him other than him being a reincarnator. He was never really described and the only thing we know about his personality is what we can infer from his actions. Another thing that really bothers me (and really my main problem with this fanfic) is that it is just a recapitulation of the movie, nothing changes except for hiccups gender, the mc doesnt interact with anyone other than hiccup, nobody seems to ever talk about or to him and he just kind of tags along to whatever hiccup does, i would also like to point out that some interactions that he has with hiccup are straight out just things hiccup did with astrid in the movie (ex: the part where they ride together for the first time). Sorry for the long rant but i was kinda dissapointed that the first fanfic i found of httyd ended up being just a rewrite of the original.

Definitely rushed and no depth to the story as of ch 18, there is also almost no change to Canon. Idk the authors thoughts but maybe they are trying to speed the 1st movie along and get to after dragons are accepted to deviate from the plot. Basically the first 18chs have been a narration of the movie with the addition of the MC, I think it needs to slow down a lot. There is no depth in the characters at the moment. it just feels like as I said earlier, a narration. Definitely room for improvement, I am curious to how the plot will develop as this is my first HTTYD fic. Definitely room for improvement but it's added to my list5 Stars for goodluck

Doing the routine shameless author review ;)

There's no development. If you're below 10 in age then you'll like it.

Finally, a good Httyd reincarnation Fanfic. You're getting my five-star review cause I've been looking for a story like this for a while! Keep it up author

Great story but can you please just include the non-chapters in the new chapters? it keeps making me think there are more chapter than there are.

like it so far hope that there will be more soon 🙏 🙂 😊 🙌 😀 ✨️

great choice if your looking for a httyd fic, though i will only stop reading if it turns Yuri or Harem, it's just not my thing especially Yuri I don't swing that way