Item: A New Life In How To Train Your Dragon
Rating: 5
Author: DeathE

DeathELv1410mth

2024-02-18 11:15

Definitely rushed and no depth to the story as of ch 18, there is also almost no change to Canon. Idk the authors thoughts but maybe they are trying to speed the 1st movie along and get to after dragons are accepted to deviate from the plot. Basically the first 18chs have been a narration of the movie with the addition of the MC, I think it needs to slow down a lot. There is no depth in the characters at the moment. it just feels like as I said earlier, a narration. Definitely room for improvement, I am curious to how the plot will develop as this is my first HTTYD fic. Definitely room for improvement but it's added to my list5 Stars for goodluck

A New Life In How To Train Your Dragon

TheEndlessAbyss

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Liked by 12 people

Replies2

TheEndlessAbyssAuthor

Thanks for the review, I'm not really rushing anything, but I do see what you mean. I'm mostly following canon, with slight changes here and there, but I'll definitely try to improve. hope you enoy the later chapters I'm planning. :V

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IcedMiloLv4

u do you author

TheEndlessAbyss:Thanks for the review, I'm not really rushing anything, but I do see what you mean. I'm mostly following canon, with slight changes here and there, but I'll definitely try to improve. hope you enoy the later chapters I'm planning. :V

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