Second review of this shameless author and an accurate review. If you're expecting a fic where you see the day to day life of the MC and that he knows the plot or is a trouble magnet like a Chinese novel? This is not your cup of tea What to expect? -Original story using the DC universe (comics, movies, series) with AU touches to tie the story together. -Character development including secondary characters (villains, friends, and love interest). -Powerful but progessive MC, where he is knowledgeable but not all-knowing. Has to train and grow as the plot progresses. -A ghost rider with an original origin story adapted to the DC universe (no mephisto, or other marvel elements) where he will have some original powers but not insta OP (no reality warping or anything like that) Note: the first 10 chapters have a lot of spelling mistakes, and sometimes are hard to read, if you pass that, I promise you a great and interesting plot, where you will get attached to the differents characters and plot Oh and it's not harem Wonder Woman is the love interest. No systema, reincarnation or transmigration

So, the first thing that dropped the score was making the MC blind. Then u basically gave him sight anyway. It was dumd and annoying. but i ignored it like it never happened and hoped you would just never bring it up again. Then you commenced the retelling of justice league WAR with a little DCEU thrown in. Without the MC at ALL. So 3 chapters, 3 LOONG chapters without the MAIN CHARACTER. after that, this fanfic was dead to me. You retold a story I've already watched before, but now i get the joy of just READING it with no changes.

To be honest, in my opinion, the Ghost Rider character is absolutely useless, since there is already a similar Spector. Both the first and the second are spirits of vengeance..

The supposed protagonist who he is, I read several chapters and the author doesn't even mention him, and I don't think the author needs an extensive introduction of characters that most readers if not all already know [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Feel like this would be a better fic if the MC wasn’t a side character

What can I say? I am a shameless author I hope you like the story a lot, comment your ideas, it will be very appreciated as my growth as an author

Author has turned the Ghost rider to a joke. Rider is more of a mascot or a side character. He can't even take revenge for himself when his copmpany gets attacked. Seriously, I was expecting something good but my expectations were quashed rather fast. Not my cup of tea. Again I will say, Ghost rider in this story is just a big joke.

SO FAR SO GOOD. HOWEVER, IT WOULD BE BEST IF AUTHOR SEPARATED THE DIALOGUES AND NOT STUCK THEM TOGETHER IN ONE PARAGRAPH. IT IS QUITE MESSY READING "SOMEONE TALK HERE" "THEN ANOTHER PERSON'S DIALOGUE" RIGHT AFTER. ALL IN ALL, PLEASE CONTINUE. ALSO, IMMA JUST IMAGINE THE MC LOOKIN LIKE THAT HARRY OSBORNE GUY, JAMES FRANCO, WAS IT...

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Me encanta el libro!!!!!! Aparte del hecho de que el MC no es un reencarnador sino un original del verso DC, su desarrollo de personaje me encanta y me parece un puntazo que se quedase ciego pero aún vea las almas. Todo sin conar que Ghost Rider es y será mi antihéroe preferido