Tio_Iroh99
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- Tio_Iroh9914 days agoReplied to See_rer
Yes.
- Tio_Iroh997 months agoReplied to Rigchel
Agree
- Tio_Iroh997 months agoReplied to Rigchel
For the plot I'm putting together, let's say that Chaos doesn't exist. Or it could be The presence
- Tio_Iroh997 months agoReplied to Rigchel
Another trivia: It is thought or known that in reality Zeus had only enormous strength. All his powers over the sky were inherited when he married Hera, who had original dominion over the sky.
- Tio_Iroh997 months agoReplied to Rigchel
Yuga Khan is dead.... or not?
- Tio_Iroh997 months agoReplied to Tio_Iroh99
My recommendation is that you begin to develop in a more descriptive way each detail of the following arc. Not just because Peter is the MC the things should happen. Now that the spider supreme is going to involve him more explain better his powers and maybe make him lose so he can learn and grow.
- Tio_Iroh997 months agoCommented
I've been reading your story for a while and I like it but brother, YOU LACK TO DEVELOP YOUR CHARACTERS. Emma is flat Peter is flat His powers are gary stu granted because it's convenient for the plot and now you bring in the new universe in a 0 explanatory way.
