After finishing fourth arc(or is it three? eh i consider that one long enough to be an arc) all i can say is that good start but thats it. Uses the same idea as a reward 3 times, which by the way is nothing. Mc is a hypocrite too. Story doesn't go anywhere at least from what we see. Spoiler from now on. Like lots of things happen yes but in the end there is nothing. He gets strong but why? Bc he will face bigger enemies? than who is this enemy. How does some things work like his old self leaving a note to his current self. There are many answer i can think but cmon man 69 chapters and nothing. Every important reward was meaningless moon cell memorices that tell nothing. Nero start was really cool. Drama was good, romance was good and then jack the ripper was also good. He suddenly wanted to do have s*x with his wives enemy suddenly that was weird but ok its going good. Tomamo arc was just wastefull in my opinion. Too focused on drama that was weird. Its ending was going really great tho, i really liked his desperation but then arcuid happened and boom suddenly he acts like nothing happened. I am not even gonna talk about scathacth. I liked how you gave lancer a family life but cmon i hated his interactions with scathacth, they felt so fake and forced.(btw i don't like her as a chrachter too so i may be a little biased. dont know, such a boring chrachter to me). I don't know bro it started as kinda serious than turned into waifu collection. Currenct arc is about sigurd so im interested how youre gonna turn it but im not sure if i will contuine to see the end of it. Anyways its writing quality is good and has great update rate. Mc sucks. Goes from boring to interesting to trash. World is... ok? I mean some places are great but some are just not explained. I did expect more from jack the ripper arc ngl, he mostly went to 2 places(btw that arc could have gone much better with him actually exploring, trying to find clues way longer than how fast it happened). I don't think you are a bad writer, it just went complety different from what i expected(especially after you saying it hardly counts as harem at the start. This is just blatantly harem). I think it could have gone way better with few changes like removing servant summoning, his way paying to upgrade, getting questionable power ups (and actually killing scathatch). Personally i hated how you handled Rin either. Rin has a crash, mc beds 3 people than kills his "child", comes back and marries her in shortest way possible. Not even half a chapter if im not wrong btw. Anyways thats it. I'm sure this is not even a good review just wanted to say these things that bothered me.
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"He suddenly wanted to do have s*x with his wives enemy suddenly that was weird but ok its going good." Where? Yeah, MC has hypocrite personality and which will be handled later. As for the Memory Fragments, as I have said it will be explained with every volume. Believe me, I dont have any problem dumping everything in single chapter but then can you promise me that you will remember everything? You, along with 90% of people, will probably forget everything, I am pretty sure. Sorry to say this but I cant just explain every single mystery in single chapter. I cant. And I dont think anyone can if you want to know everything from the start. As for Rin, yeah. I didnt invest much in writing her character well. I should have also invested after Arcueid chapter, explaining MC's moving forward motivation. Cant say I am perfect or good in writing down every single thing. But any way, thanks for honest review.
yeah my bad just checked it and confused the s*x part with something else i guess. for the memory parts i know you're gonna explain it, i just wanted to give my personal view that it's too slow. Approximately we got 1 memory every 30 chapters and by this speed it gonna take a while. I cant read your mind about your future plans so i guess you got that covered.
Yeah, I will be covering single fragment for every volume. MC summoned one from every class plus one extra class so by that mean, there will be 8 Memory Fragments. Pretty sure it will take less than 200 Chapters which I think isnt much.
