this one is good story but why they change mc name and other chara name like that, its make you feel weird and discomfort when read especially you already read the raw version
Morning dusk crow
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LIKEas an amateur writer myself, I do everything I can to increase word count, mainly cause if I don't the book I'm writing would be over in 50 or so chapters. I wanna at least have 70 chapters for my first novel, and if people like it I'll write a sequel, or a prequel, who knows.
Alanray64:Usual attempt to westernise the eastern released novels, to make them more palatable for English speaking readers. In the end they end up sounding strange and the use the surnames a lot. Gary Smith and not just Gary for example. (Personally I also think it subtly increases the word countđ)