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AncientGodDragonLv51yr
2023-11-19 05:39

I changed my mind I had given it 3 stars before but this is hot garbage as i read more raws. Author keeps making new enemies out of thin air, snatches away MC s things to make it look fair including opportunities and sorts and lots of consistency issues. If anyone has read gate of good fortune they will know what i am talking about

I Can Accumulate Proficiency, Starting from Alchemy

March of the Groping Fish
3.2
1872 Chs

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AncientGodDragonLv5

i will give an example of this garbage . Later in the story our mc gets a powerful kind of energy (consider it energy for now). He had 1650 units and 1 unit allowed him to break through a minor level and it could be used for skills too. But just a few chapters later all 1649 units got consumed because of something trying to invade hi. Exactly 1649 units were consumed . This pattern is repeated throughout the book . Looks like on his wedding night when the author was going to sleep with his wife, 10 other men suddenly appeared and kicked him out of the room. Thats why he is traumatized and keeps writing stuff like this

1yr
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dope_is_my_nameLv15

Thank you bro dodged a bullet their

AncientGodDragon:i will give an example of this garbage . Later in the story our mc gets a powerful kind of energy (consider it energy for now). He had 1650 units and 1 unit allowed him to break through a minor level and it could be used for skills too. But just a few chapters later all 1649 units got consumed because of something trying to invade hi. Exactly 1649 units were consumed . This pattern is repeated throughout the book . Looks like on his wedding night when the author was going to sleep with his wife, 10 other men suddenly appeared and kicked him out of the room. Thats why he is traumatized and keeps writing stuff like this
1yr
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RalseLv15

thanks for the warning this is almost as bad as protagonist getting NTR I read for fun not to accumulate more anger

AncientGodDragon:i will give an example of this garbage . Later in the story our mc gets a powerful kind of energy (consider it energy for now). He had 1650 units and 1 unit allowed him to break through a minor level and it could be used for skills too. But just a few chapters later all 1649 units got consumed because of something trying to invade hi. Exactly 1649 units were consumed . This pattern is repeated throughout the book . Looks like on his wedding night when the author was going to sleep with his wife, 10 other men suddenly appeared and kicked him out of the room. Thats why he is traumatized and keeps writing stuff like this
1yr
39
Silver_SytheLv4

thanks to your sacrifice 🙏... I am alive

AncientGodDragon:i will give an example of this garbage . Later in the story our mc gets a powerful kind of energy (consider it energy for now). He had 1650 units and 1 unit allowed him to break through a minor level and it could be used for skills too. But just a few chapters later all 1649 units got consumed because of something trying to invade hi. Exactly 1649 units were consumed . This pattern is repeated throughout the book . Looks like on his wedding night when the author was going to sleep with his wife, 10 other men suddenly appeared and kicked him out of the room. Thats why he is traumatized and keeps writing stuff like this
1yr
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RedKaizerLv13

aaaa....the ol' Gate of misFortune.... famously know in the community back then as one of the unluckiest mc even with irregular update.... what happened to that I wonder...dropped it for more than 5 years

1yr
4
obinna_phrankLv15

I beg to differ the novel is 10 out of 10 for me story is engaging ever changing, and mc has challenges all the way. not to OP

11mth
AncientGodDragonLv5

You are free to have your own opinion and taste. This is just not my cup of tea and i find these types of stories extremely unpleasant and hence my opinion.

obinna_phrank:I beg to differ the novel is 10 out of 10 for me story is engaging ever changing, and mc has challenges all the way. not to OP
11mth
9
Other Reviews
Saeid_Bin_HossainLv4

The translation is just terrible .I don't understand why webnovel even bothers to translate a novel if they just post MTL version of the novel.

1yr
23
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ghosts12Lv3

the translation improves drastically after first couple of chapters

1yr
20
2
DaoistYb8xi5Lv3

Extremely bad translation. The terms keep changing every chapter.

1yr
8
The_AMLv11

Cliche master, master of all cliches. All the cliches that I don't like Mc transmigrates☑️ finds out he'll be kicked out of the sect if he doesn't ...☑️ Struggles but fails ☑️ gets a panel\ golden finger ☑️ ergo the training montage ☑️ gets super strong and skilled and comes back better than before☑️ also, he just has characteristics that I don't Super naive super kind super polite and amiable I mean you're in a ruthless cultivation world. Sooner or later it will backfire. He's just so easily targeted all the time. And his "friends" Target him too.

1yr
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nyypeLv4

I ve read all chapters so far. And now I want to do a good review.Shortly, this mc has fire root and developing & earning money from alchemy job. But somehow using the money (spirit stones) for cultivation is purer way than using pills and elixirs. Using elixirs gave people less progress than 1 spirit coin. And the elixirs prices go from 5 to 50 spirit coins. Hmm and this guy is probably best alchemist under Elders who got foundation established level cultivation. and he doesnt even use his pills for cultivating. So annoying how author didnt even give an idea about using own pills. Mc lvl ups every 3 to 6 years and there are no friends. close door cultivation. somehow he requires some spirit coins to level up faster, so he goes out for selling pills and getting money. Whatever I wrote here is all the story how goes. If you want to read / follow the process up to you. Byeee

1yr
4
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GintokikatsuraLv12

MTL translation with a few edits.I expected better.

1yr
4
1
Shi_WuLv4

just another garbage mtl... not worth anyones time

1yr
3
Darktea9876Lv4

very bad translation.there is not much difference from MTL.it's not worth reading.

11mth
2
EdocLv3

the translation constantly messes up the realms and the character is way too stupid to tolerate..

1yr
2
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