looking at the story being in the top 5 most popular ranking is a complete joke in itself due to being one of a select group of books to read from for a fp. The story is interesting to an extent, the characters are a little to unrelateable, and the progress of the story is very slow. The world was not established very well with the only stand out points being a select group of people having privilege over others due to occupation, a new form of transit, a type of housing, a few races of population, and finally a card game that for some reason controls the world. The story locks its chapters way to soon before even finishing the second type of mission and does not allow any form of connection with the characters besides maybe a feeling of pretentiousness from the main character. The side characters are less comic relief and more punching bag. Some dialog seems to be mixed slightly having issues. The only factor in helping notice who is speaking are the noticeably trying to be cute catch phrases that are more annoying than endearing. I hope for the best with the future projects of the author. In fact the only reason not rated lower is because I notice someone took the time and effort to but themselves out there with attempting this creation. Honestly I wish i could go back in time not even the ten minutes it took the finish reading the unlocked chapters was worth the fp.
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