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The_AMLv111yr
2023-11-29 07:03

It's really not that good. Other than just being boring. The MC is naive and gets taken advantage of easily. Also, it's not very immersive nor does it have any vivid descriptions. I feel like I'm being told a story instead of shown a story. It's a 2.6\5 for me

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Death_012Lv3

Thanks for the save. Naive MCs are the most annoying.

Daoist922237Lv15

What? Mc is ten years old at the start and even now is only 13 and where is the naive thing u talking about? He not no reincarnation or other bs of cause he not gonna be knowing was happing

CreatorOfTheVoidLv15

His not bro is saying nonsense

Death_012:Thanks for the save. Naive MCs are the most annoying.
DaoistPCowBDLv4

MC is literally reincarnated

Daoist922237:What? Mc is ten years old at the start and even now is only 13 and where is the naive thing u talking about? He not no reincarnation or other bs of cause he not gonna be knowing was happing
ali_atgLv13

so others are using him for his power and taking advantage of him and he can't say no something like that, a pushover I think?

Daoist922237Lv15

Huh?where did that happen 😭

ali_atg:so others are using him for his power and taking advantage of him and he can't say no something like that, a pushover I think?
ali_atgLv13

idk where that happen I was just asking before I start reading this novel I don't like naive mcs where they form relationships love interest and friendship all I want is a loner like fang yuan who doesn't care about others

Daoist922237:Huh?where did that happen 😭
iXplore_7_2504Lv12

Please if you have or know any loner protagonist, do send the names

ali_atg:idk where that happen I was just asking before I start reading this novel I don't like naive mcs where they form relationships love interest and friendship all I want is a loner like fang yuan who doesn't care about others
ali_atgLv13

cursed immortality ,born in blood, devil slave

iXplore_7_2504:Please if you have or know any loner protagonist, do send the names
Master_CelestialLv4

I reached chapter 23, where did that happen? Mc seems rather smart so far.

Abdirahman_IsseLv4

Am genuinely curious how anyone can stand such cold-hearted characters.

ali_atg:idk where that happen I was just asking before I start reading this novel I don't like naive mcs where they form relationships love interest and friendship all I want is a loner like fang yuan who doesn't care about others
HarrowdaddyLv4

Better than the doormats I’m used to, and besides I’m here to see the story of someone not tryna pretend I’m them

Abdirahman_Isse:Am genuinely curious how anyone can stand such cold-hearted characters.
ali_atgLv13

it's just everyone has different taste in novel

Abdirahman_Isse:Am genuinely curious how anyone can stand such cold-hearted characters.
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