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IcedDemon
IcedDemonLv11yr
2023-11-21 21:51

I really like the way you keep Sunny's early character intact in the later chapters, I also think the way that Dane earned his aspect is believable and cool. That whole first nightmare was great in general. I can't wait to see more!

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FieryBaldachin
FieryBaldachinAuthor

Thank you!

blazinggrimm
blazinggrimmLv4

but I still don't see anything special about his aspect author please explain without dropping any spoiler. How his aspect makes him unique

FieryBaldachin
FieryBaldachinAuthor

Hmmm...you know how each time Sunny and Neph get a new core, they get another shadow/augmentation? Dane will have something pretty unique there.

blazinggrimm:but I still don't see anything special about his aspect author please explain without dropping any spoiler. How his aspect makes him unique
Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

Do you plan to update any time soon?

FieryBaldachin:Hmmm...you know how each time Sunny and Neph get a new core, they get another shadow/augmentation? Dane will have something pretty unique there.
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