blazinggrimm

loving the format of your story. no unnecessary drama

really is that going to be a problem

Author is it possible for you not to frequently mention reacher or wick name. Maybe you're trying to paint an image but as it is now whenever their names are mentioned the immersion into the oc is disrupted and directed to either name that is mentioned

must it always draw blood can't be avoid cleanly

think it's time Mc start dominating and stop having to brawl to have a good fight he should be doing that already

what's the point of using tech which makes you bleed

can you just stop with this men of divine realm

The book is a good read I love the story it is quite engrossing. The only issues i have with the book is how the bond performs some tasks they don't need to at all and how they are constrained with some human necessities like fatigue from walking( why walk in the first place if it's not needed) there are some instances they could have remained in their tattooed form but no they have to accompany the characters in activities they don't need to

Yeah the book will always pull you back even if you leave. It has that effect

ever or till you're done with this