Story awesome hurt any of these characters for plot progression and I’ll hunt you down and kill you

Of all the reviews that I have written so far, this is the most honest one. This is one of the best upcoming fanfic novels. I would appreciate anyone who reads this to give it a try and if they don't like it reply to this review as to why. It's the only She-Ra fanfic I've seen so far and it is the best. So please give the novel a try, you just might discover what a hidden gem it is.

love the main character and the story and the writing quality.

great story with great characters, the system is well structured and unique

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i love this book and i am glad the auther is takeing there time to wright and i hope that they are haveing as much fun wrighting it as i love reading it.

I love it when the faces are good, the characters are good, the world is good, the system is good, and the romance is fantastic. You don’t need anything more. Especially when, in the right series, the main characters have no romance throughout and only in the very last minute or so, something finally happens. d=(^o^)=b

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Great Story. Great Character interaction. Even Greater Character Development. Only thing that detracts from the Story for me is the mention of "Another" Soul that came before Tigra.

really good story. the character development especially about the backround of the magicat is asome