Review Detail of EvilBlueCrystal in Singularity: Lord of Mysteries
Review detail
This is just so bad it starts with a backstory which is very long filler in which mc gets some generic gravity pathway that wouldn't have many uses other than stomping everyone he was a normal person but becomes something like fragment of God a pawn of a higher existence with two sets of memories but none of them are good or useful and gives 'logical' explanation why he has future knowledge only to make the very boring female oriented plot even less believable. Long explanations of the future events bad writing format and sentences that are hard to read like falling in an endless void plus -1 for being lotm.
Singularity: Lord of Mysteries
Shadow_Magus
Liked by 1 people
LIKEReplies4
Considering that you ask them to reply if it not primary about writing style them not replying might be the answer?
Shadow_Magus:Still waiting...
Thank you for the review. Some points I’d like to ask since this is a one star review : 1- which other fanfic of Lord of Mysteries has a gravity related pathway… I have not seen on so far so not too sure about the ‘generic gravity’ pathway 2- the plot has not even reached the point where I can explain the powers of any rank other than Sequence 9… so not sure about you saying it is useless other than to stomp peopl 3- what aspect of this is female oriented? I am curious about it as well. I don’t think I have written a single female character into my novel yet…?😂 4- I accept all criticism about my style of writting and grammar. I know it is not up to the mark for most cases, and I will try to improve on it. Based on the above 4 points, is it wrong of me to assume that you have given me 1 star for my bad style of writing; which again, I do not argue and accept it wholeheartedly. But you have it to me based mainly on that? If not please reply and explain where my novel has fallen short so I can try to improve those points Considering that you have actually tried to write a proper review, and not just thrown a 1-star review at my work just cause, I have written this reply in hopes of better understanding you reasons for the low review. I have seen you reviewing of other works and you seem to be actually reviewing works insteading of just bombing 1-stars everywhere, which is also another reason for me asking for your further inputs Thank you -Shadow
Still waiting for a reply... It is a 1 star review after all... it brings down the average a lot, ad I at least deserve to know why it is soo low... T-T
Shadow_Magus:Thank you for the review. Some points I’d like to ask since this is a one star review : 1- which other fanfic of Lord of Mysteries has a gravity related pathway… I have not seen on so far so not too sure about the ‘generic gravity’ pathway 2- the plot has not even reached the point where I can explain the powers of any rank other than Sequence 9… so not sure about you saying it is useless other than to stomp peopl 3- what aspect of this is female oriented? I am curious about it as well. I don’t think I have written a single female character into my novel yet…?😂 4- I accept all criticism about my style of writting and grammar. I know it is not up to the mark for most cases, and I will try to improve on it. Based on the above 4 points, is it wrong of me to assume that you have given me 1 star for my bad style of writing; which again, I do not argue and accept it wholeheartedly. But you have it to me based mainly on that? If not please reply and explain where my novel has fallen short so I can try to improve those points Considering that you have actually tried to write a proper review, and not just thrown a 1-star review at my work just cause, I have written this reply in hopes of better understanding you reasons for the low review. I have seen you reviewing of other works and you seem to be actually reviewing works insteading of just bombing 1-stars everywhere, which is also another reason for me asking for your further inputs Thank you -Shadow