Well I really liked it and how gritty it was, especially the part about him being the first human to get where he got. Then you go and make him a non human. I get why you did it, but because of that I now find it uninteresting to read. The premise was great up until the dan machi part. I really wish you just had him strengthen his body without all the animal feature stuff. It would have been cool to see him still as a human survivor.
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