Review Detail of LastGod in Fate/DC Universe
Review detail
Two stars is the rating I give every fan fiction. That does the immortal sin Of not describing your main character. Then you have him given his hero. Costume, and you don't describe that. You just say it looks like his normal clothes and you don't describe those. Literally brain dead stuff.
Fate/DC Universe
Gilgamesh9669
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No if i was Lazy, i wouldn't be Writing 2K chapters every two days, rather it was more of i judged that if i were to describe him, i'd confuse the reader of how he looked, so i just explained that he looked more like the pic so people could visualize it better, however i did realize later that it was a mistake on my part, and i have described his appearance later on in the story when he grows up, i go to the length of describing each of his transformations in detail, describing him felt wrong because i wanted to the readers to put themselves in his chose i guess (I realize now, that it was a bad idea)
Alfiemooon:So you were lazy? 🤨 Don't expect people to bother with your story when you don't.
Gilgamesh9669:I said he looked like the Poster of the fanfic, that's why i never bothered describing him with details
Gilgamesh9669:I said he looked like the Poster of the fanfic, that's why i never bothered describing him with details