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2023-11-05 08:25

been looking for a lucifer inspired fanfic with quality and it seems I've found it. chapters are a bit short but that is about the only thing I can criticize. It'd be nice to see a few appearances of other characters. Maze being a favorite but amenadiel showing up would be some great comedy. anyways, great story do far.

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Начало было интересным, но момент когда Люцифер стал ОП, и канон ушел сразу. Я ожидал что будет хоть какое то развитие сюжета, обретение прошлых сил и путешествие Люцифера ро миру Марвел. Но этого нет... Он просто шел нашел Локи который дрался с черным отрядом, взял скипетр и сразу вернул все силы... Зачем тут квесты, зачем система, зачем это было все... Будто 2 разных автора, 1 автор писал про приключение Люцифера в другом мире и выполняющего квесты(это то что даёт описание фанфика). А есть автор который забыл или не читал начальные главы и стал писать чтобы поскорее завершить этот фанфик... Очень прискорбно сто такое интересное начало было убито последующими главами... Будто кто то между тем что он сходил а барьер и нападением Локи, автор не выложил глав 20-30 развития истории. Если сказать проще то фанфик был хорош, а стал !#₽#&#

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