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Keal24
Keal24Lv11yr
2023-09-28 23:42

It’s a very exciting novel that captivates the reader right from the start. It was great to read the novel from start to finish due to the incredible characters that you can really empathize with and the surroundings that are perfectly described.I would definitely recommend reading this novel. The author did a really good job writing this amazing story

The Crumbling World

bloody_potato
4.7
53 Chs

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Thanks man😋

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TheLastRemnants
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Firstly, I want to give props to the author for having amazing grammar despite being sixteen and English speaking. His writing style is very unique, switching back and forth between perspectives of the characters so you can get everyone’s thought’s on the situation. It’s action packed, and the author has a way with his words. Everything is well balanced with descriptions where I can get a clear mental image on the chaos that happens. I’m not going to spoil anything, but you should definitely give this a read. Please don’t pass this gem up.

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Cosmictear
CosmictearLv15

Overall, I enjoyed the story and thought it was a worthwhile read. The Grammer was good, the plot was good, and the action was fast paced, but not in a bad way. Good job author, keep up the good work!

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Warrior_Blade
Warrior_BladeLv14

Writing Quality : Extremely well done. No error that could affect the flow of the novel. The mistakes i found didn't disrupt me whatsoever. Updating: Updating regularly is very hard. I give the author the well deserved 5 stars for their updates. Story Development: The story stays stays on point and doesn't drift far from the plot, and progresses well. Well done. Character Design: Good job to author. World background : A good constructed fantasy world with horror as a subtheme. Overall the book is quite good.

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bloody_potato
bloody_potatoAuthor

This is my very first work, and I would appreciate it if you could point out any mistakes. Additionally, the initial chapters might appear a bit shorter compared to the ones that follow, but I will work on improving them over time

1yr
Mark69
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This show starts really well and shows how much potential there is.Big fan so far.Keep it up!

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Herosamisalmi
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Banger of a story. I am hyped to see where this is going

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Coach_Ronald
Coach_RonaldLv2

I really like where the story is going to. It's something else, i would say it is outstanding. Keep up the great work author👍

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EvelinaSB
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I looked at the picture of the book in the beginning and was just shocked at how good it looked and I just had to read this book. The book was great, it always gave me an adrenaline rush in between. Also the cover of the book is amazingly well painted. I recommend everyone to read this book[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=fp][img=coins]

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Its my first time reading a novel, but from what i have seen i think im going more for this. I realy like the development of this story. And the way it is written

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