bloody_potato
a bloody potato writing bloody stuff. Discord: https://discord.gg/46KkdYqE
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- bloody_potato2 days agoCommented
tooooooooooo short.... need more:/
- bloody_potato4 days agoCommented
The writing was better this time. However, there are still some parts which could've been written with less telling. But an interesting intrudoction for the beginning.
- bloody_potato4 days agoReplied to Mr_Mysteries
If you want to write better then try to show and not tell too much. The story seems interesting but you really use too much telling which makes it a bit boring to read. I hope you get what I mean
- bloody_potato5 days agoReplied to Politician
It's on hiatus. I'm currently rewriting it on my discord. I won't ublish it here 'cause I want to self publish it as a physical books. If you want to read it then join my discord: https://discord.gg/qyDPjyuX
- bloody_potatoa month agoReplied to Matisha_22
ty bro🙂↕️
- bloody_potatoa month agoReplied to Lienkie_Victor
ty🙂↕️
- bloody_potatoa month agoReplied to Icyskender
ty bro
- bloody_potatoa month agoReplied to AncestorSol
😩🤝 Btw I got a Server for my novel (I'm the author) so If you want to join the just respond to me. There are other reader and in general other information about oob, like the manhwa I'm working rn :)
- bloody_potatoa month agoReplied to AncestorSol
Yeah xD. I've read it but only after someone told me what reference I did when I wrote this story
- bloody_potatoa month agoReplied to AncestorSol
Well it all happens way too fast and Cham is his best friend
